Teacher`s+Comments

25th May 2009 Hi guys.. I am going to write my general comments on this page I have created.. I have had a good look at your wiki.. I have made comments on some of the discussion panels for some pages, make sure you read them and make the corrections. Lines of inquiry...check the 2nd one-- ...have you found out what people are doing locally about this problem?..What strategies does the government have....maybe this could be important to include in your loi. I know you went to CVC..how will you link this in your inquiry? You have a lot of interesting information about contamination, some useful pictures and videos...however you need to find a way of organising the information you have so you can see what you have and what you still need to find out. It is not clear who has posted what (each text, video, image etc) and for what purpose- You need to write in your own words and draw conclusions for each resource you have posted there. Find a way of doing this, maybe you can make a page for each key question and link them to your lines of inquiry: For each piece of information uploaded, remember you don’t need to the complete text but another way is to extract the important bit and cite the exact source, and who posted it .. Resources: Text/video/interview etc After each resource you are posting you need to: □ quote/cite the exact source and say who posted it. □ Highlight if text or write shortly in your own words what does it mean □ Say which key question or line of inquiry you are addressing, making sure you show it is relevant for your inquiry. If text is too long, you don`t need to upload the whole text You can extract the important information from it and do the same as above. You also need to think how are you going to present all the information...FOCUS YOUR INQUIRY..REMEMBER THE LOCAL ISSUE AND TO PROPOSE SOLUTIONS... always go back to the central idea and lines of inquiry so you don`t lose track of where you are heading! The same applies as the comment I posted in other pages......identify resources, relevance, quote source and who posted it

Organise the bibliography and the list of pages from top to bottom so it makes more sense..you may need to ask Mr Wallis for help on this. PARTICIPATION?... I don`t see frequent participation on the wiki.. some of you have not been in to the wiki recently..this is really important because the clock is ticking and you all need to contribute to make this successful! The idea is that you should try and visit it on a daily basis or at least more frequently to make contributions for your inquiry.. from last monday 18th-angela from last wed 20th Andres and Daniela

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